hey man.
i thought id leave a review.
This song jumps straight into it.
I thought that the song would be very iffy because of the cheap techno drums and the obvious presets, but..so far its pretty good.
i like the melody.
there is one thing bugging me though.
you have some kind of bell instrument going that is kind of throwing the song off...cause your pitch-flanging it.
by now that little fast hi hat is kinda gettin on my nerves...maybe turn it down?
This doesnt really fall under 'trance'...
id say more of 'dance'.
it has a large techno influence, but its very danceable.
kudos on that.
This melody is very addictive.
the fade off at the end made me pretty dissapointed.
i would have put a little more effort into the ending.
my summary:
quatlity: Some of the instruments needed to be turned up and whatnot, but pretty decent there.
arrangment: repetitve, but thats what dance is.
insutruments: it didnt seem like you made one yourself, so not to much effort right there.
good job overall.
7/10
Z3N0N--_--
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