FUCK IM LATE FOR SCHOOL
whatever :)
the begginning is very unique man, i honestly never seen these notes coming. The synth is a little...iffish though.
y'now ive been meaning to review your shit and say that i hated the hell out of that clap, but i never got around to it.
so far its the only part that i hate.
The retro beat is...well...retro.
I think when you brought the melody in it could have more impact. Like say, a boom or something.
when i make music, i think its all good and then my bro comes down stairs and says 'dude i can barely hear the open hat'...
same here.
when the melody hits i can barely hear the open hi hat.
If this is supposed to be for clubs, i wouldnt have so many breaks.
You have the beat goin for roughly more than 30 or 40 bars, but then you just cut out.
bah.
this si CLUB man! the only time you should stop the beat is when the melody is coming up.
and you did.
but then you stoppped it again after that, which kinda bugged me...
this song is very trbly and shit, maybe its jsust your speakers and everything.
so, my summary:
synths: very impressive. i would kill if i could make synths like that.
arrangment: needs a bit of work...seems like your too used to making trance. the beat cant stop for too long.
quality: good job. no compressing problems or ANYTHING.
overall:
8/10
good luck with this song man!
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